Quickstrike's meal (not colored)

this is my newest character, Quickstrike! yes, he's a snake, and yes, I will be posting his information page... anyway, it was :KimmiePinkPanda:'s birthday a couple days ago, AND NO ONE CARED! a couple online people did, but the majority of people didn't! I was kinda mad when Kimmie told me about this, this is how I expressed my anger... so yeah, I drew this... I also wanted to work on my prospective, so this helped me out... I have to say, this was some pretty good work...
Here's what's in the picture, if you can't tell: Quickstrike has you all coiled up and is striking at you... the people who purposely forgot and didn't care about Kimmie, are the ones who are coiled up in this picture...
Anywho... leave comments, and tell me about my perspective! I know it needs work... I am gonna color this when I have time, so I'll post that too... and yes, I got lazy with the scales towards the right side...